whispering Universe…..Haiku

open hearts hear the
whispers of the Universe,
and words…..write themselves….
i’m in awe… of words,
and the constant miracle
of our poetry!
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38 thoughts on “whispering Universe…..Haiku

  1. dawnhosking says:

    Words have limitless potential 😉

  2. this speaks to me
    i can’t explain how
    “it’s a good thing”
    (why i’m quoting martha stewart ,that’s not a good thing).

  3. Kirsten says:

    What I love about words is that two different people can use the same word, yet express a totally different tone in a poem. Words are are the pictures that poets use to express their hearts and thoughts…how cool is that?!? Beautiful poem!

    • hi Kirsten, so good to see you. and yes , it’s very cool, as a former painter, i’m finding words express my feelings and color my stories far better than my paint ever could. words were never my vocabulary, i don’t talk very much, i’ve obserevd more than i’v conversed, so ‘words’ for me now, using them like i do in poetry for the first time, is like learning a new language. so yeah, i’m a little in awe!

  4. yelena says:

    i can almost hear the music of spheres reading your cosmic haiku..so lovely and uplifting, thank you! 🙂

    • hello yelena, i love seeing you on my pages, ty. and yes, the ‘music of spheres’ is everwhere in this poem, your hearing is perfect!

      there is something very ‘ancient’ about writing Haiku, i’m writing another poem about it. it puts me in a very special place, a place of recall, a place joining the natural rythms of things, it’s very mysterious and magical. i’m sure this isn’t making much sense, i haven’t found all the words yet…

  5. SSMatthews says:

    Smooooooooth read! Tricky little buggers those things. Sometimes they roll off the tongue and other times just get stuck between what is thought and what is written. You handle yours quite well indeed!

    • well, i really appreciate you saying that, because this is also a very tricky thing to write about. one wrong word and there is misunderstanding everywhere, but this was happenening too often to not at least try and explain it, and just trust that you all would understand.

      if Mr M says i did well, that’s enough for me to sleep well tonight, ty.

  6. ‘words do write themselves’ MF (hugs)

  7. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words says:

    I agree…
    and Beautiful thought
    Take Care…

    • ty ladyblue, i thought you would understand,
      it’s a little dicey talking about ‘words writing themselves’,
      an awful lot can be misunderstood.

      thank you so much for your wisdom and keen insight.

  8. Reblogged this on Teacher as Transformer and commented:
    Words, poetry, and the universe are all part of an unfolding.

  9. Beautiful thoughts….I fully agree. So blessed to have found your blog through Ivon’s reblog.

  10. Noora says:

    This beautiful piece made me smile 🙂 A smooth read indeed!

  11. Love the ending. Miracle indeed.

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