often in
vulnerable
moments
or any
random
millisecond
in
the
tiniest
stain
scent
syllable
spark
igniting its
p a i n f u l
memory
because
i hold so near
the echo of
e a c h
tear
i
ever
caused
…and regrets
and my searing
m e l a n c h o l y
but
if this
is the
story
of the
world
unfolded
why such
a sad way to
…finally reach
shore
home
find
love
y o u ?
.
.
.
.
We only hurt the ones we love
Why we don’t need a reason
Gonna get all that you deserve
And all that you believe in
Beth Orton
who could know then 
Deep, I´m no poet but to my untrained eye I think is quite original the way you write and did I say deep? Stay frosty
your response is no better compliment, thank you for reading and taking the time to leave such kind words.
untrained myself, i just write from my heart.
Really liked the structure here and the sentiments. “Or any random millisecond” …..just a warm sigh.
The way back is always painful, it seems, as is the way forward… I really like the feel and the flow of this.
at least to this heart, remembering, appreciating all that came before matters whether it’s sad or not. ty again for reading so many of my words and taking the time for such inciteful replies. it means a great deal to me.