reach me

thCA1FLI0V

through

all of my life

i’ve hid inside shadows,

never willing to believe there

was someone like you to

reach me.
.
.
.
please,

don’t give up on

who you think you’ve found.

because it’s you,

and only you

will ever

find

me.

written April 15 2013
submitted to 20 Lines A Day
prose and poetry challenge for April

21 thoughts on “reach me

  1. audrina1759 says:

    I hope the person doesn’t give up on you. Nice post.

  2. that realization is almost a fresh breath of air in self discovery ~wonderful writing !

    • i so look forward to your wonderful insight, thank you.

      acceptance…..it’s been my hum, my mantra the past few years. this poem was written for the guide on that journey. i’ll be writing about her often.

      ::::peace::::

  3. Sky Vani says:

    I am not an expert, but I really like your writings. And I still adore this one. I felt a need to come back and read it again. I wish if I could save it πŸ™‚ ” please, don’t give up on who you think you’ve found.” – perfection!

    • Well, i’m learning a little everyday as a novice should. Some words are playful, some expermental and then others come from that inspired place, he essense of who we are. This poem came from that raw, pure place.

      Thank you Skye for liking so much of my work today, fot being my ‘expert’ and keep the:::light::::

      • Sky Vani says:

        I wanted to post it on my page, but I don’t know how 😦

      • here is the entire coding with the pic, just copy and paste it into your New Post template like you would your own poem.

        what a gift, thank you Sky! πŸ™‚

        through

        all of my life

        i’ve hid inside shadows,

        never willing to

        believe

        there was someone

        like you

        to

        reach me.
        .

        please,

        don’t give up

        on who you think you’ve found.

        because it’s you

        and only you

        will ever

        find

        me.

      • there is a ‘REBLOG’ function at the top of your blog, on the taskbar. that might be how most bloggers do it, i just don’t have that experience yet.

        one way or another, it should work.

      • Sky Vani says:

        it works πŸ˜€

  4. Sky Vani says:

    Reblogged this on STAIN MRLJA and commented:
    I hope this will work. I had to reblog it because this is the most beautiful thought that I’ve read lately. As I said, I wish I wrote it. Thank you, my new shiny friend, Who! πŸ™‚

  5. Sky, i’m sorry to reply so late but my ‘Notifications’ are not showing me these comments of yours. 😦 what an honor to have a writer like you who i admire so much, offer me such wonderful compliments. thank you for reblogging my poem, i’m happy it worked. πŸ™‚

    you make me ::::blush::::

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  8. this is wonderful.milkbone moments.when was your anniversary?

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